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HOLIDAY
In the holidays I stay at my aunty's and uncle's house. When I got there I said to my self This looks really new because when I went there the last time it looked very old. Now as the house is painted outsides and inside the bath room looked nice and new.
So on that sunny hot day we went to the beach. when we got to the beach called takapuna i ran fast and jumped into the
water.For lunch we had fish & chips.After having a big swim we went to my aunty's then when we got in the we all fell a sleep........................
HOLIDAY
In the holidays I stay at my aunty's and uncle's house. When I got there I said to my self This looks really new because when I went there the last time it looked very old. Now as the house is painted outsides and inside the bath room looked nice and new.
So on that sunny hot day we went to the beach. when we got to the beach called takapuna i ran fast and jumped into the
water.For lunch we had fish & chips.After having a big swim we went to my aunty's then when we got in the we all fell a sleep........................
Hi Tauwhare,
ReplyDeleteI love that story of yours. Maybe next time I think you should add in some speech marks,that way we know someone is speaking. Anyway great job you used simple and complex sentences. Keep up the great work.
Vivienne