Wednesday, March 6, 2013

My Narrative Story

Arriving at the reserve I see a little kid  waiting on the side of the rock with its feet touching the water. I shouted " Are you alright there". "What's your name" I carefully ask. "Hmm" He replied  looking down really worried. As I'm wondering what wrong, I sit next to him. He was probably thinking who I was.  

I'm walking on the sand. Taking my sandals off, I look over to see if the little boy is still there. "I shout HELP" looking for the little boy. "Where are you!" I shouted. I am really worried. Then all a sudden I see a little hand getting washed out to shore. "HELP HELP" he screams. I jump into the salting water swimming out to shore. I'm trying to save him. But I see a shark fin heading towards him.

"Grab my hand" I tell the little boy. He says "Save me save me please before the shark comes" He grabs my hand and I put him on my back. Swimming like the shark was right behind us. I look back OMG the shark following us. My hand touches that rock. Finally!  I throw him onto the rock. With a thank you from the little boy I ask “Now can you tell me your name” “Massyn” he replied.

Rushing him to the hospital really scared. We got to there the doctors rushed him inside. I wait outside the room. Finally the doctors come out. “Is he alright” saying to the doctors. “Now I can go into and see him right” I said to myself. As I walked in, Massyn was laying on the bed sleeping. He wakes up with a surprise. “Hi” I say to Massyn.  He ask if I could do him a favour. “Sure” I replied. He ask me politely if I could buy him some dinner. Yes indeed I will.  I took him he’s dinner, then I told him that I need to go now see you in the morning. “ Okay” Massyn replies.

Three weeks later I see him playing with his friends. He runs up to me and ask “Hey aren't you the girl that save me”. “Hello your Massyn right!” I asked.  He thanked me for being there for him. I told him that i’ll see him in the future.

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