tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6784145420439459181.post4413039796467221202..comments2023-05-12T20:17:32.837+12:00Comments on Tauwhare : JupiterPES Blogs 2013 Adminhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03043164228733682681noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6784145420439459181.post-50012222799535035892011-11-16T08:45:46.239+13:002011-11-16T08:45:46.239+13:00Hi, my name is Sarah and I am a student in EDM310 ...Hi, my name is Sarah and I am a student in EDM310 at the University of South Alabama. I really enjoyed your story. It was cool that you described the planet in your story with great detail. The only things that I saw that could be changed was the white letters should be changed to black because it would be easier to read. I also saw that you made a few mistakes in your wording so you should read your blog or get someone else to read it before you turn it in. Keep up the good work.<br /><br />* I will be talking about my comment for this post on <a href="http://powellsarahedm310.blogspot.com/>my blog</a>.Sarah Powellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04036169149871620891noreply@blogger.com